What You Say In A Thank You Note Or Letter: Choose Words That Sparkle
by Gene Griessman, Ph.D.
When it comes to writing messages of appreciation, many people use the same old words over and over again, seldom using a vivid, fresh one.
If you want to make your messages beautiful, break out of your vocabulary rut. Quit relying on a handful of hackneyed words and phrases such as “Thank you very much for the fine job you did. Everyone who heard you said it was a fine presentation.”
Who would ever want to remember, quote, or keep such a message?
A thank you note or letter is an excellent place to try something different. Because you will use very few words—and I strongly recommends that your message be brief—you can take the time necessary to make your words glow.
When you write a message of appreciation, use words that add a touch of spice to your note or letter. Kelly Browne, in her book “101 Ways To Say Thank You,” has compiled a list of fabulous words that you can use. Browne calls her list “The Thank-You Thesaurus”
Here are Browne’s colorful words:
amazing, astonishing, astounding, attractive, awe-inspiring, beautiful, beyond belief. bright, brilliant, colorful, dazzling, excellent, exceptional, extraordinary, fabulous, fine-looking, generous, gleaming, glistening, glowing, good-looking, gorgeous. hard to believe, incandescent, inconceivable, incredible iridescent, lively, lovely, luminous, marvelous, miraculous, multicolored, out-of-this world, outstanding, radiant, remarkable, rich, shimmering, shining, sparkling, spectacular, splendid, startling, striking, stunning, surprising, unbelievable, vibrant, vivid, wonderful
It is amazing what you can do with just the right word. You can make prose sound like poetry. That’s what Hemingway did. In fact the poet Derek Walcott called the best of Ernest Hemingway’s prose “an achievement superior to anything in poetry.”
But don’t resort to high-flown verbiage. That will sound artificial and insincere. In many instances, just one shimmering word—perhaps chosen from Kelly Browne’s list or a word that her list suggests—can make your message gleam. And be kept, remembered, and cherished.
Just in case you didn’t notice, I used some words from Kelly Browne’s list to write this post. It was a lovely exercise.
You can do it too. Just keep the list in front of you and look for ways to substitute some of the words on Browne’s list for your own over-used ones. This will transform your personal messages or even your business communication from dull and forgettable into striking and vivid
Source: “101 Ways To Say Thank You” by Kelly Browne (Sterling: NY and London, 2008 www.sterlingpublishing.com)
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